I agree with others that this version of the mission statement is strong. Thanks to all who worked on it!<div><br></div><div>Rebecca<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, May 11, 2011 at 1:56 PM, Shannon Carter <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:Shannon_Carter@tamu-commerce.edu">Shannon_Carter@tamu-commerce.edu</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex;">I agree! Seems ready to me! Nice!<br>
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</div><div class="im">I give a hearty yes to Hannah's revision and my thanks to all who worked on this.<br>
Sugie<br>
On May 11, 2011, at 10:45 AM, <<a href="mailto:kbaca@nmsu.edu">kbaca@nmsu.edu</a>><br>
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> Hannah, thanks for thinking more on this and finding a good revision. I'm with<br>
> Deborah on a yes.<br>
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> Thanks also to Deborah and Liz and Sarah and others who added important ideas<br>
> and wording. I want to again thank Steve and Susan for your creativity and<br>
> thoughtfulness in crafting the original--you made our little committee look good! kb<br>
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> ----- Original Message -----<br>
> From: Deborah Mutnick <<a href="mailto:Deborah.Mutnick@liu.edu">Deborah.Mutnick@liu.edu</a>><br>
> Date: Wednesday, May 11, 2011 11:27 am<br>
> Subject: Re: [CBW_Exec] CBW Misson Statement: Almost There!<br>
> To: Conference of Basic Writing Executive Board <<a href="mailto:cbw_exec@tamu-commerce.edu">cbw_exec@tamu-commerce.edu</a>><br>
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>> I think Hannah's revision is fine. It's clearly delineated and<br>
>> still concise. I say finis!<br>
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>> <a href="http://commerce.edu" target="_blank">commerce.edu</a>] on behalf of Ashley, Hannah [<a href="mailto:HAshley@wcupa.edu">HAshley@wcupa.edu</a>]<br>
>> Sent: Wednesday, May 11, 2011 9:15 AM<br>
>> To: Conference of Basic Writing Executive Board<br>
>> Subject: Re: [CBW_Exec] CBW Misson Statement: Almost There!<br>
>><br>
>> I know this will drive some of you crazy, but now that my grades<br>
>> are in, my head seems to be in gear in a different way. I went<br>
>> back through the mission statement, meaning to just format it for<br>
>> better use (adding italics to a key phrase in each bullet), and I<br>
>> realized the one about collaborations had way to many things in it<br>
>> to choose one key phrase. Based on that, I moved the "bigger"<br>
>> phrase to the top of the list of bullets, so that it now reads:<br>
>> "CBW pursues these ends by promoting appropriate support for Basic<br>
>> Writing that fosters college access and success for students who<br>
>> might otherwise be denied admittance through:"<br>
>><br>
>> I'm not wedded to it, as I know it is a bigger change than a tweak,<br>
>> but that's what you get for putting something on Google docs.<br>
>><br>
>> Hannah<br>
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