[CBW_Exec] CBW Misson Statement: Almost There!

[J. Elizabeth Clark]

I agree. Thanks to all for such wonderfully hard work! I think this is
ready to go to the whole CBW list.


Liz

J. Elizabeth Clark, Ph.D.
Professor of English 
LaGuardia Community College--CUNY
e-mail:  lclark at lagcc.cuny.edu
Phone:  718.482.5665 
www.jelizabethclark.com
>>> Rebecca Mlynarczyk  05/11/11 4:30 PM >>>
I agree with others that this version of the mission statement is
strong.
Thanks to all who worked on it!

Rebecca

On Wed, May 11, 2011 at 1:56 PM, Shannon Carter <
Shannon_Carter at tamu-commerce.edu> wrote:

> I agree! Seems ready to me! Nice!
>
> ________________________________
>
> From: cbw_exec-bounces at tamu-commerce.edu on behalf of Sugie K
Goen-Salter
> Sent: Wed 5/11/2011 12:51 PM
> To: Conference of Basic Writing Executive Board
> Subject: Re: [CBW_Exec] CBW Misson Statement: Almost There!
>
>
>
> I give a hearty yes to Hannah's revision and my thanks to all who
worked on
> this.
> Sugie
> On May 11, 2011, at 10:45 AM, 
>  wrote:
>
> > Hannah, thanks for thinking more on this and finding a good
revision. I'm
> with
> > Deborah on a yes.
> >
> > Thanks also to Deborah and Liz and Sarah and others who added
important
> ideas
> > and wording. I want to again thank Steve and Susan for your
creativity
> and
> > thoughtfulness in crafting the original--you made our little
committee
> look good! kb
> >
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: Deborah Mutnick 
> > Date: Wednesday, May 11, 2011 11:27 am
> > Subject: Re: [CBW_Exec] CBW Misson Statement: Almost There!
> > To: Conference of Basic Writing Executive Board <
> cbw_exec at tamu-commerce.edu>
> >
> >> I think Hannah's revision is fine. It's clearly delineated and
> >> still concise. I say finis!
> >>
> >>
> >> Deborah Mutnick, Director of Writing
> >> English Department
> >> Long Island University
> >> 1 University Plaza
> >> Brooklyn, NY 11201
> >> 718.488.1110
> >> deborah.mutnick at liu.edu
> >> http://thelongestisland.blogspot.com <
> http://thelongestisland.blogspot.com/>
> >>
> >> ________________________________________
> >> From: cbw_exec-bounces at tamu-commerce.edu [cbw_exec-bounces at tamu-
> >> commerce.edu] on behalf of Ashley, Hannah [HAshley at wcupa.edu]
> >> Sent: Wednesday, May 11, 2011 9:15 AM
> >> To: Conference of Basic Writing Executive Board
> >> Subject: Re: [CBW_Exec] CBW Misson Statement: Almost There!
> >>
> >> I know this will drive some of you crazy, but now that my grades
> >> are in, my head seems to be in gear in a different way.  I went
> >> back through the mission statement, meaning to just format it for
> >> better use (adding italics to a key phrase in each bullet), and I
> >> realized the one about collaborations had way to many things in it
> >> to choose one key phrase.  Based on that, I moved the "bigger"
> >> phrase to the top of the list of bullets, so that it now reads:
> >> "CBW pursues these ends by promoting appropriate support for Basic
> >> Writing that fosters college access and success for students who
> >> might otherwise be denied admittance through:"
> >>
> >> I'm not wedded to it, as I know it is a bigger change than a tweak,
> >> but that's what you get for putting something on Google docs.
> >>
> >> Hannah
> >
> >
> > Kathleen Baca
> > English and Communication Dept.
> > Doña Ana Community College
> > MSC 3DA, PO Box 30001
> > Las Cruces, NM 88003
> > 575-527-7626
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