[CBW_Exec] CBW Misson Statement: Almost There!
Gregory R Glau
Gregory.Glau at nau.edu
Wed May 11 12:56:48 CDT 2011
Me, too -- what a great group!
gg
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Greg Glau
Associate Professor and Director, University Writing Program
Northern Arizona University
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On May 11, 2011, at 10:51 AM, Sugie K Goen-Salter wrote:
> I give a hearty yes to Hannah's revision and my thanks to all who worked on this.
> Sugie
> On May 11, 2011, at 10:45 AM, <kbaca at nmsu.edu>
> wrote:
>
>> Hannah, thanks for thinking more on this and finding a good revision. I'm with
>> Deborah on a yes.
>>
>> Thanks also to Deborah and Liz and Sarah and others who added important ideas
>> and wording. I want to again thank Steve and Susan for your creativity and
>> thoughtfulness in crafting the original--you made our little committee look good! kb
>>
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: Deborah Mutnick <Deborah.Mutnick at liu.edu>
>> Date: Wednesday, May 11, 2011 11:27 am
>> Subject: Re: [CBW_Exec] CBW Misson Statement: Almost There!
>> To: Conference of Basic Writing Executive Board <cbw_exec at tamu-commerce.edu>
>>
>>> I think Hannah's revision is fine. It's clearly delineated and
>>> still concise. I say finis!
>>>
>>>
>>> Deborah Mutnick, Director of Writing
>>> English Department
>>> Long Island University
>>> 1 University Plaza
>>> Brooklyn, NY 11201
>>> 718.488.1110
>>> deborah.mutnick at liu.edu
>>> http://thelongestisland.blogspot.com
>>>
>>> ________________________________________
>>> From: cbw_exec-bounces at tamu-commerce.edu [cbw_exec-bounces at tamu-
>>> commerce.edu] on behalf of Ashley, Hannah [HAshley at wcupa.edu]
>>> Sent: Wednesday, May 11, 2011 9:15 AM
>>> To: Conference of Basic Writing Executive Board
>>> Subject: Re: [CBW_Exec] CBW Misson Statement: Almost There!
>>>
>>> I know this will drive some of you crazy, but now that my grades
>>> are in, my head seems to be in gear in a different way. I went
>>> back through the mission statement, meaning to just format it for
>>> better use (adding italics to a key phrase in each bullet), and I
>>> realized the one about collaborations had way to many things in it
>>> to choose one key phrase. Based on that, I moved the "bigger"
>>> phrase to the top of the list of bullets, so that it now reads:
>>> "CBW pursues these ends by promoting appropriate support for Basic
>>> Writing that fosters college access and success for students who
>>> might otherwise be denied admittance through:"
>>>
>>> I'm not wedded to it, as I know it is a bigger change than a tweak,
>>> but that's what you get for putting something on Google docs.
>>>
>>> Hannah
>>
>>
>> Kathleen Baca
>> English and Communication Dept.
>> Doña Ana Community College
>> MSC 3DA, PO Box 30001
>> Las Cruces, NM 88003
>> 575-527-7626
>>
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