[CBW_Exec] CBW Misson Statement: Almost There!

[Sugie K Goen-Salter]

I give a hearty yes to Hannah's revision and my thanks to all who worked on this. 
Sugie
On May 11, 2011, at 10:45 AM, <kbaca at nmsu.edu>
 wrote:

> Hannah, thanks for thinking more on this and finding a good revision. I'm with
> Deborah on a yes. 
> 
> Thanks also to Deborah and Liz and Sarah and others who added important ideas
> and wording. I want to again thank Steve and Susan for your creativity and
> thoughtfulness in crafting the original--you made our little committee look good! kb
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: Deborah Mutnick <Deborah.Mutnick at liu.edu>
> Date: Wednesday, May 11, 2011 11:27 am
> Subject: Re: [CBW_Exec] CBW Misson Statement: Almost There!
> To: Conference of Basic Writing Executive Board <cbw_exec at tamu-commerce.edu>
> 
>> I think Hannah's revision is fine. It's clearly delineated and 
>> still concise. I say finis!
>> 
>> 
>> Deborah Mutnick, Director of Writing
>> English Department
>> Long Island University
>> 1 University Plaza
>> Brooklyn, NY 11201
>> 718.488.1110
>> deborah.mutnick at liu.edu
>> http://thelongestisland.blogspot.com
>> 
>> ________________________________________
>> From: cbw_exec-bounces at tamu-commerce.edu [cbw_exec-bounces at tamu-
>> commerce.edu] on behalf of Ashley, Hannah [HAshley at wcupa.edu]
>> Sent: Wednesday, May 11, 2011 9:15 AM
>> To: Conference of Basic Writing Executive Board
>> Subject: Re: [CBW_Exec] CBW Misson Statement: Almost There!
>> 
>> I know this will drive some of you crazy, but now that my grades 
>> are in, my head seems to be in gear in a different way.  I went 
>> back through the mission statement, meaning to just format it for 
>> better use (adding italics to a key phrase in each bullet), and I 
>> realized the one about collaborations had way to many things in it 
>> to choose one key phrase.  Based on that, I moved the "bigger" 
>> phrase to the top of the list of bullets, so that it now reads: 
>> "CBW pursues these ends by promoting appropriate support for Basic 
>> Writing that fosters college access and success for students who 
>> might otherwise be denied admittance through:"
>> 
>> I'm not wedded to it, as I know it is a bigger change than a tweak, 
>> but that's what you get for putting something on Google docs.
>> 
>> Hannah
> 
> 
> Kathleen Baca
> English and Communication Dept.
> Doña Ana Community College
> MSC 3DA, PO Box 30001
> Las Cruces, NM 88003
> 575-527-7626
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