[CBW_Exec] Fellowship Call Revised

[Susan Bernstein]

Sonya,

This is beautiful-- very pleasing to the eye, especially all that
purple.  :)  One revision suggestion:  The first sentence under the
heading "Apply today" reads: "Fellowship applicants should include a
*detailed* two-page letter that *details* the benefits of attending
the CBW Workshop and CCCC."

Perhaps change the first "detailed" to "comprehensive" to avoid
redundance?  Other suggestions?

Best,

Susan

On 4/27/08, Shannon Carter <Shannon_Carter at tamu-commerce.edu> wrote:
> I think this revision does a GREAT job addressing the concerned addressed
> thus far. Thanks, Sonya! What do the rest of you think?
>
> Shannon Carter
> Associate Professor of English
> Texas A&M-Commerce
> shannon_carter at tamu-commerce.edu
> http://faculty.tamu-commerce.edu/scarter/
> 903-886-5492
>
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: cbw_exec-bounces at tamu-commerce.edu on behalf of Sonya Armstrong
> Sent: Sat 4/26/2008 1:49 PM
> To: cbw_exec at tamu-commerce.edu
> Subject: [CBW_Exec] Fellowship Call Revised
>
> Hi everyone!
>
> I'm attaching a newer draft of the fellowship call, which, I hope, reflects
> all of our suggestions for revision. I tried to recreate Shannon's graphic
> design because it really is eye-catching and fun, but I also tried to darken
> and enlarge text (including using shading) as Barbara suggested.  Also, I've
> tried to reemphasize the focus of the application letter based on Susan's,
> Marcia's, and Shannon's comments.  I also reordered the details of the call
> based on Bill's suggestions. And, finally, I have suggested the addition of
> "introductory/developmental" based on Barbara's question about who can
> apply.
>
> So...what do you think? Does this flyer accurately represent the spirit of
> the fellowship? Please let me know if I've accidentally overlooked a
> suggestion, or if there are other changes needed.  Also, aside from the CBW
> listserv and the CBW website, are there other places we should advertise?
>
> Have a great weekend!
>
> Sonya
>
>